Madness Neurosis Collab Okay!
That was good! But have you ever heard of suspense openings? Cos this aint got one! Madness cartoons should ALWAYS have one.
Anyway, animation-wise it was really good (better than I could do anyways) but you neeed a better story (yes, Madness DOES have a story line!). You guys have a lot of potential to becomegreat here, keep at it!